Just say it!

It is a truth often assumed that a lawyer in need of an argument must arm herself with rules stated in legalese. There could be few more difficult assumptions to overcome in educating new lawyers.

One of my more profound light bulb moments as a young lawyer came a few months into my first job, after I’d written the first draft of a brief for a partner. After he’d had a chance to review the draft he called me into his office to discuss it. I entered, carrying, of course, the draft that by this time I’d virtually memorized. He asked me why I thought we’d win. I glanced at the draft and he said, “No. Put it down. I want you to tell me in your own words, in plain English, without telling me what the cases say.” So I slowly sputtered out a brief explanation in plain English, thinking that this was going to be painstaking, that the simple plain English explanation would be followed with a discussion of each case and the reasoning of each judge in each case, and then we’d have to cobble all these pieces together . . .

In response to my plain English explanation, he said, “Then why didn’t you just say that?” I blinked, and asked in stupid amazement, “I can do that?” He laughed, and answered, “That’s exactly what you are supposed to do.” Wow, just explain in plain English, without resort to legalistic rules and long chains of reasoning from premises established by Lord Blackstone? What an amazing idea, and what a truly difficult one to grasp.

I was reminded of this today when I read the post at Lawyerist.com entitled “Improve Your Legal Writing: Just Say It“:

Say what you want to say. Do not imply it, do not hint at it, just say it. This can be difficult at times, but it will improve your writing, and make your arguments more persuasive.